Delivery : You seemed a bit nervous and your commentary was rather stilted and rambling as a result. It is perhaps better that you don’t read from notes. Also, choosing the Pecha Kucha format should help you focus.
Content : The slides were well-chosen and logically ordered and I was impressed that you provided some contemporary examples. More critical theory is needed and I also feel you should address the mythology of hair colour: ‘dumb blondes’, ‘fiery redheads’ etc.
DS
I was really happy with my feedback and was really impressed on how quickly I received this. The first pointers that I really need to work on is my delivery. I know myself that I am not really comfortable talking in front of people but I feel the only way that I can improve on this is to rehearse in front of people to build up my confidence.
Choosing the Pecha Kucha style presentation will be helpful as in this type of presentation I have 20 slides each on a timer for 20 seconds. This will help me to stop rambling as I will have limit to what I can say in each slide.
Content - I was glad that David was happy with my power point skills and also some of the work that I had shown. I only showed one example of how 'colour changes everything' That's why he has suggested looking at the Mythology of hair colour. I feel this could work really well within my presentation as it begins to look at how colour can change peoples view of other peoples appearance.
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